Caligula's Launderette

Aww, this is very fluffy cute. On to the criting... 1. Get rid of the elipses. There are essentially useless here, and they make for poor structure. 2. Wordage issues, ...

At first I thought is YWS closing? - and then I read it through. Forgive me for being trite, but there is nothing else to say but 'Thank you, Nate.'

So taking my crack at Wraith . I've read both chapters twice over, so I think I have more of a feel for it now (or atleast have something more ...

*snicker snicker* Dear CL, I debated on sending you this, debated even writing it. Here I am wandering even before I begin. Question one, why is my hair green? Does ...

squee! No, this helps me lots. I have this tendency to over describe, note: it used to be awful, I keep those old pieces around for amusement. I did up ...

Welcome Khayriyyah! :D

Oooo! Is that the second paw, that is farther back than the other? If it is, it looks off. But other than that splendid.

I'll do a more indepth critique when I have some more time. There were only a few things that caught me off guard. 1. You never mention his rank. 2. ...

I forgot, it's exam time isn't it? Those evil, evil exams. Well good luck! :D

So after I wrote Acrobat, the idea bit me hard so I started planning a story, and came up with Artemis Eden . Thanks to everyone who had something to ...

Oh fudgemonkeys... I had this beautiful response and my computer just ate it. :x Let's try this all over again. If Dusky and Shadow are stealing your talent and you ...

O M G! That is genius. :D

tra la la - let's dance. So this was open for about an hour, and I think I have something coherent to say know. Have you ever read Bomb by ...

smaur - I obviously rule. - Didn't we go over this already. :D We did? ... wait, so do I rule? *glee* uh... :roll: yeah... do you need a *smaur ...

Yay, congrats Shimmer! Here's your dancing pink elephant: :elephant: